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those two

She and he
Will make ripples

She and he
Will hold hands
They will laugh, and look,
Maybe
Love.
They will think of one another- each own
Excitement, butterflies, sunshine;
Here on the other side (I stole),
The sea swells- crash!  The sky
Is red- the old blood of my heart.
I try not to care for a fantasy,
But my life feels old
Once more, I have nothing to live for.


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bigsurchica
really a mix of the first 3 options

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  • invisiblescars
    May 2, 2007
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    i like this it speaks of a love that is being bonded in an assortment of ways


  • blondone
    April 29, 2007

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    I like the write not sure on the authors note I don't see your name and the option number please re-read the rules


  • individuality gold member
    April 28, 2007

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    ah there is always something to live for i think, and it usually pops up in the mad times of thinking there is nothing. a good poem.
    thanks for visiting my poem and lol at mush.

  • Rexford
    April 28, 2007
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    Powerful

    "The Sky is Red - The Old blood of my heart".. Amazing imagery