The only images in my head are death, destruction, darkness, and black is all I can see, everywhere I turn is blood dripping, eyeball ripping, and decapitation, the funny thing is everyone that is dying is by my hand, swords clashing, gunshots firing, and fatal screams worse than a banshee, all I can do is smile and laugh at everyone I kill, blood and guts all over my clothing, another funny thing is this is something I would never do I知 usually a very nice guy in fact I知 so nice if someone kicks me in the nuts all I say is have a nice day, but today it is my turn for inflicting excruciating pain on people, someone or something really screwed up my day, in fact I知 smiling right now, I want to kill every thing and everyone today nothing is safe, I hope everyone dies and all I壇 do is laugh right now I feel I want to kill, especially the people that toyed with my emotions yeah it is funny to make a person who has never had a girlfriend and everyone plays with him until I rip there throat out then it is hilarious, you want dark tell me something I don't approve of face to face I値l show you dark, right as I知 shoving my fist down your throat, I used to be a nice kind little angel but now all I am is a sick twisted demented demon who will stab someone out of pure boredom and laugh, I heard an interesting story this guy stabbed his girlfriend 64 times because she cheated on him everyone knows 63 times will do it HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA what you didn't find that funny, do you like games, well let's play one of my favorite games I call it TORTURE I値l start by slitting your wrists then slit your ankles I値l tie you up to 2 poles connected to a pulley system and secure the poles and while you are just hanging there I値l bring out whips, chains, baseball bats with nails imbedded into them and I値l just beat you to a bloody pulp and then I値l start the chainsaw and cut you limb from limb and I値l just sit there and laugh at the pathetic screams you let out and right before you take your last breath I値l ask you if you have any last requests, and if I don't like what you say I値l shove my foot in your mouth and watch you suffocate, hi I知 Andrecious WANNA PLAY.
Author notes
Cannibal Corpse
A contest entry
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WOW!!!
THIS IS SO BRILLIANT I LOVE IT! haha, i was smiling as i read it. Let's see now, for lines i liked. I liked these ones:
"story this guy stabbed his girlfriend 64 times because she cheated on him everyone knows
63 times will do it HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA what you didn't find that funny, do you like
games, well let's play one of my favorite games I call it TORECHURE"
AND OF COURSE DEFINITELY THIS LINE:
"everyone
plays with him until I rip there throat out then it is hilarious"
aN ALL AROUND GREAT WRITE, VERY GRUESOME and full of torutre which yet again makes me smile. lol.
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hmm
Very raw, sickening, disgusting.....SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL. I enjoyed this because of the message you have sent behind it.....the reason as to WHY you would want to do such a horrible thing....I like this alot. I thank you for entering, Goodluck.
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Sorry but I told you to enter the quote in the authors comments box and you did not. I have DQ'd your entry for this. Sorry for this but I did specify in rules that you obviously didn't read over. Thank you for your entry and best of luck next time!
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Oh yeah, I've felt like that a time or two (or three, or four.....) Sick and twisted, love it. Finally see someone with a mind that is ALMOST as demented as mine is. Keep it up!
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veary dark, I like it!
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sweet tight hot dude im in love with you you have a mind at least have as chaotic as mind maybe more great work and glood luck be happy buzz im some one who would od all that
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Quit editing this poem it is good the way it is lol
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Extraordinary!!! I have seen dome dark and evil things in my life but you have GREAT POTENTIAL to be extremely evil. WELL DONE!!!
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nice but i bet this little demon could be worse and i bet you that i could say a whole book of things i wanna do to a shit load of people here on center. from RT
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Wow- that's just plain crazy. So, thanks for the entry! lol- good descriptions even if they did startle me
Good luck!
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nice and truthful and u kno when that time comes i'm right there with you, and this you should kno!!!!
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GREAT YECK!!
That was almost as dark and desturbing as any of my poems lol.
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i upgraded to a better more disturbing version
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it was sick and dark and i'm gonna make more
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this is a great poem and i hope you luck in the ontest
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thanks i was really pissed at everything that day and that was the only way to get it out
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