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Spiritual Side of Nature


Elements bow ceremoniously
before woven covering of early Spring;
acknowledging a rare spiritual sonnet.

Life flows enthusiastically through flora veins,
intricate undersides of delicate green,
interstice , silken membrane.

Metaphors spiral from spell-bound mind
toward choral prayer
as though in homage of bended knee.

Humble lips, silently whispering in appreciative awe
as virgin first fruits unfurl
toward optimistic sun.

Primary beginnings incline toward empathy
not of superiority of order.... but
of understanding in reality of the spiritual...


In all things,
especially... nature!

 

 

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  • paullallady silver member
    April 28, 2007

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    what a very beautiful poem this is, so descriptive and touching. You did a wonderful job with this one, I really loved it. Great rythm and flow.


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    April 28, 2007

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    How delicate...how dear a poem this is. Perhaps the last two lines weakened it a little for me..but nonetheless...gorgeous pennign and beautiful thoughts.


  • Frozentearz
    April 27, 2007

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    This poem had a wonderful touch and flow within it
    given the true essences of Nature, a delight to read,
    I have read it twice,
    Thanks for sharing,
    warm thoughts
    Frozentearz


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    April 27, 2007

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    Beautirful and thought provoking

    I love the way each verse was started with such impact...This is so very powerful and gives you pause to think...Thank you for thought provoking lines to read in this mirad of trivial words...


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    April 27, 2007

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    This was just terrific

    I felt such a bond with this poem, and an understanding of truths written. A wonderful entry. Best of luck in this contest, though I doubt you'll need it. Wonderful. ~Pamela


  • Sunshine Always
    April 27, 2007
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    Absolutely beautiful my dearest friend. Your words unfold the beauty hidden within them to create this wonderful piece. As always you have brought to the fore all that nature can offer and more..Good luck for the contest Katie ...you shouldn't need it with this amazingly textured piece...mal

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