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Judgment Day Celebration

Pot filled so carefully,
simmering on the stove.
Potpourri softly wafting,
with the scent of clove.

Seated in her chair,
eyes focused in concentration.
Each stitch lovingly sown,
in her homemade creation.

Roast in marination,
seasoned just right.
All in preparation,
for the party tonight.

He needs cheering up,
her thoughts on her son.
Terrible the things,
those bullies had done.

But this party will be,
the celebration deserved.
The sentence was fair,
and justice will be served.

She just could not wait,
to see his big grin.
After completing and presenting,
to her son his new skin.

After draining the pot,
and starting the roast.
Chilling the wine,
they'd use to toast.

Soon it would be time,
to get the party underway.
A year in the making,
but finally Judgment Day.

The guilty were punished,
no time for an appeal.
Part of their retribution,
was providing this meal.

The wine was brought out
the IV was all set.
Fresh red drawn directly,
from the pretty brunette.

All of each convicted,
was made good use of.
Their meat, hair, even skin,
that fit like a glove.

 

 

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  • Arkbear gold member
    April 29, 2007

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    OMG!!!

    After reading this, I would hate to get on

    your bad side!!  You penned some wonderful imagery

    here for us to chuckle about....yet wonder about your sanity LOLOLOL!!

     

    This a a ghostly write with just the right amount of descriptive

    criteria to keep me intrigued before getting down to the picture ~

     

    You gave me a HUGE...AHA!!!

     

    This should win a place in the top 3 for sure!!

     

    The best to you my Dear in this contest ~

     

    Bear ~ 


  • Puppydog gold member
    April 28, 2007
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    WOW!

    You really had me going in the beginning Then I realized what was going on.


  • Desire gold member
    April 27, 2007

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    Oh My!

    Oh My Apple Pie~
    Magnificent piece penned my Friend
    What images to feast the senses...
    Oy~
    for some reason I kept thinking..
    blood sausage...
    but more for cannibalistic tastes

    Loved it!
    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • DarkHunter
    April 27, 2007

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    This is gross and sick and the picture makes me wanna vomit! This is a really awesome dark write and the rhyming is excellent. There's nothing beater than an IV party, pukes in the bowl of blood. Best of luck in the contest.

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