You are the priceless treasure for me
You don't know but my heart beats within thee.
The sweetest desire of my soul
Heaps of your love make me whole.
People suffer from the thought of death
But I know with your love I can breath
After death on this earth.
I don't need to take a second birth.
My heart will continue beating in the chest of life
Even after I close my eyes from all the light,
Your love takes me to such a height
Where a part of me can rest throughout the day and night.
A contest entry
- ~ Priceless Treasures~ by Frozentearz.
525 points, ended May 5, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Beautiful verse filled with a gentle and devoted love. It is wonderful to have such depth of feeling for another. Best to you, Elizabeth
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It is amazing how love wakes up your thoughts..So sweet to read and cherish,inspite of sad occassionally.You got such a wonderful way of saying things..I can not but keep a special place in heart for my sister
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A great piece with an interesting rhyme scheme... you have given us something to think about...I thought the 3rd stanza was the strongest.
Thanks for entering and best wishes in the contest!
Frogz~ -
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Thanks a lot for reading and commenting.
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