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The Stoner

Hi, my name is Alie
And I like your style
So, I hope this rhyme is worth your while..
I'm a stoner it's the truth
And I'm stoned now so forgive the lack of "hoot"
I can't rhyme worth shit
But I love to write
SO let me be your stoner friend
Or I’ll cry allot
And listen to FuNk?

Author notes

I want to be your stoner friend

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  • DesolatELifE
    March 12
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    If I wasn't meet, I might like this. I'm not me, so I can't tell.


  • XxMysticalFantasyxX
    April 28, 2007

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    HEHE this was cute!!! GO STONERS GO lol this is a great poem so short but very well done and you dont suck at rhyming thats for sure this was very interesting hehe keep writing and good luck in this contest!


  • radicaljusticeman
    April 27, 2007
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    i like the randomness...