My wasted heart will love you,
You can mend it,
Or, you can break it,
Or, throw it in the waste paper basket.
My wasted heart will love you,
You can play with it,
Or, you can burn it,
Or, put it in the casket.
Author notes
“My Wasted Love Will Love You”--- This line was influenced by a scene in a British film called "Love Actually"
A contest entry
- Love by infactuated love.
302 points, ended May 1, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very nice - I love this!!
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I found the entire poem nice..fullly emotional.
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I think the repetition of the line "My wasted heart will love you" actually had put the urge rightly. I find other lines a mixture of sadness and anger.
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i liked it...i liked how you have shown your feelings and made the point that either way i am going to love you, whether you love me back or not. "you can mend it, or you can break it"...basically take your pick!
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I didn't particularly care for it. It seems a bit repetitive. Maybe expand a little bit next time, and have a more varied choice of words...
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