I should have said I'm sorry
for ever letting you go-
but with the darkness closing in
all I could I say was Darling-
I love you so...
And I know it's not enough for you
to hear those four small words-
when all inside you feel alone
and your broken heart just hurts...
I know I should have said sorry
for ever letting you go-
but with the darkness closing in on me
all I could say was I love you so...
And I yes I know it's not enough
to keep you from falling apart,
but I pray that it may sustain my love
in your precious fragile heart...
Oh I should have said I'm sorry-
for ever letting you go.
But with the darkness closing in
all I could think was How do I let you know?
Baby, it was your love-
that kept me breathing through the night
but when morning came up yonder
the God's had won this fight...
And I should have said I'm sorry
for ever letting go...
but as the darkness came so close
Darling, you needed to know...
I know it's not enough for you
to hear these four small words
when all inside you feel betrayed
and the pain just hurts and hurts...
But Baby...Baby, I am...Baby, I am sorry...
I- am- sorry...I'm so so sorry...
Baby you need to know...I am sorry.
Author notes
THis is a song, not a poem
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awwwww!!!
i want you to sing it for me sometime! i love you!!!!! this is super good! this would definitely have to go in the commando girl book! -
hmmm .. heartfelt. And what type of melody do you envision to go with this?
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Something softer in the beginning, eery so to speak- then it should pick up pace and mellow out in tender weaves of melody.
I never realized how difficult it was to describe a melody 
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wow.
deep
i love it<333
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Thank you!
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Thank you!
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