Tantalizing tastes
[of your drug-induced lips]
fill my throat
as you brush my chest with the fire of your eyes
furtive glances of lustful-indulgence
heartfelt whispers of “I love you” in my ear
some crazy-obsession with the swell of my bottom
[poking through the satin sheets]
kisses on eyelids still caked with shadow from the night before
you used to call me the night before
but now it’s just “come over to my place”
&& we twist and turn in those sweat-slicked coverlets
love me hunny, like you’ve
never
loved
before
Author notes
PlasticPrecious wishes you a night filled with [hot] bodies and [cold]fingered lovers.
A contest entry
- Public Places && Tangled Bed Sheets by bird-mad girl.
1200 points, ended May 19, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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kisses on eyelids still caked with shadow from the night before
you used to call me the night before
but now it’s just “come over to my place”
&& we twist and turn in those sweat-slicked coverlets
love me hunny, like you’ve
never
loved
before
that is pretty amazing,but i think the repetitive is a bit over used,other than that i do really like it=] -
Gorgeous....love the usage of vocab.....
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:):(:):(:)
i love it it makes think of a girl i know (long sigh)
man o man she was so sweet....but anyway i love ie -
VERY SEXY!
I must say, this is a great sex poem...
I almost felt as if I were there.
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AMAZING!!! i loved the way your expressedd yourself.
keep up the aweosme writting
much love, love HB
xoxoxoxoxoxox
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BAIBEEEEE
its been forever[and 5 days]
and your even more amazing than you were. -
i love this doll. the ending of it was pretty darn amazing,. you are a fabulous writer [:
♥
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Whoaa I love this<33
"some crazy-obsession with the swell of my bottom
[poking through the satin sheets]
kisses on eyelids still caked with shadow from the night before
you used to call me the night before
but now it’s just “come over to my place”
&& we twist and turn in those sweat-slicked coverlets
love me hunny, like you’ve
never
loved
before"
Damn;; this is hot!
It reminds me of the song "Lover I Don't Have to Love" by Bright Eyes. Which is a dead give-away that this must be sexxy as hell, haha!
♥
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this was fucking delicious. I love how you made it dirrrrrrrrty. oh god that was hot. fuck. fuck. fuck.
I love how you made this romantic and so rough and 'fuck me hard' at the same time.
xxx
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oooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!! haha, awesome!!!!
'some crazy-obsession with the swell of my bottom
[poking through the satin sheets] '
mmmhmmm!!! oh yeah! lol i LOVE This! and i have fallen in love with you! lol
your ending--i cannot describe{!}- i just love it! love it all!
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RAWRS
"kisses on eyelids still caked with shadow from the night before
you used to call me the night before
but now it’s just “come over to my place”
&& we twist and turn in those sweat-slicked coverlets
love me hunny, like you’ve
never
loved
before "
honney this is A.MAZING
xox
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oh, reminds me of some midnight rondevou's that i have joined in on. lovely windows....
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sex me
this was perfect-
XxprettylittlewhorexX
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furtive glances of lustful-indulgence
heartfelt whispers of “I love you” in my ear
some crazy-obsession with the swell of my bottom
[poking through the satin sheets]
kisses on eyelids still caked with shadow from the night before
you used to call me the night before
but now it’s just “come over to my place”
I LVOE LOVE LOVE THIS BEHBEH!!!
you are soo amazing!!
grat job dollie pie!
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MMMM.....down right steamy and sexy
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Beautiful write.
Much enjoyed this.
I think I shall fast-become addicted, if your other writes are anything like this.
These are lovely:
"...as you brush my chest with the fire of your eyes
furtive glances of lustful-indulgence
heartfelt whispers of “I love you” in my ear"
Love it.
-Allura
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mmmmh hmmmm
b.b.baby doll;;
sex me up with your words..
and anything else you'd like
"kisses on eyelids still caked with shadow from the night before
you used to call me the night before
but now it’s just “come over to my place”
&& we twist and turn in those sweat-slicked coverlets
love me hunny, like you’ve
never
loved
before"
because you just described my life at this point..
you are amaze.
♥
-your queen
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mmm.
this is sexxxi.
[turns me on a bit]
*purrs*
i love you smexxiface.
♥
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