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Brought in by the Changing Wind

I laid in my dark corner
Bruised and broken upon the floor
Begging for no more hands to raise
No more poison words to sear my flesh
Bleeding, crying into nothingness

Until a cool breeze blew in
Caressing aching skin, soothing savage wounds
And the breeze brought in a loving face
A wonderful accent that nearly healed my soul
As it gently touched my heart

He picked up each piece of me
Laid them carefully into place,
Mended me
Tended me
Kissed the bruises on my face

Saved me from the life I lived
Took me far from hateful home
Carried in his embracing arms
Brought me to a grander place
Where I'd be safe and warm

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  • soldiersoul gold member
    September 18, 2007
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    gotta love those TRAVELOCITY guys huh


  • BabyBun silver member
    April 27, 2007
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    A heartfelt and uplifting entry which I enjoyed immensely. Best of luck in my contest