My reflection will never see me
as I really am.
Author notes
It's true, isn't it?
In a list
A contest entry
- Give Me A Two-Liner by PrettyRagDoll.
600 points, ended May 19, 2007, 73 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hit Me With Your Best Shot - One Liners Only(1) by 2lullabyhaven.
745 points, ended June 12, 2007, 76 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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LOL
I tend to disagree. I think we can do ourselves as we
choose. lol and in following that thought to its final resting place, well I guess what I'm saying is that one can if one would only so choose.
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I love, love, LOVED this. I don't think I can stress it enough. And you are right, this is very true. The setup added so much power; it made the reader question their own lives, and made them take in your words. Thanks for sharing.
-BabyBear -
Wow!
So true and how many of us have said that
I know I have
Loved this one!
Power packed in two lines
Best wishes to You in the contest!
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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FANTASTIC WRITE!
It is indeed so very true, we seldom see ourselves for the way we really are.
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