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My Beloved!

You taught me to hate
the abusers of love

You preached me to denounce
the violent war theories

You desired  me to decry
the tricks of unhealthy politics


You told me to deny
all acts of atrocities on weak lots

For all this accentuated friendliness MY BELOVED!
I emulate you as my weapon to kill all the inhuman disorders

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Decry all inhuman tendencies

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  • Neophyte
    April 28, 2007

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    not exactly sure what the weapon is, but the message is clear!

    nice writeup and thank you for entering


  • XxMysticalFantasyxX
    April 28, 2007

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    such a powerfull poem..the imagery was really well done!! you have a lot of skill. Keep writing and I will be looking at more of your poems best of luck in this contest