You taught me to hate
the abusers of love
You preached me to denounce
the violent war theories
You desired me to decry
the tricks of unhealthy politics
You told me to deny
all acts of atrocities on weak lots
For all this accentuated friendliness MY BELOVED!
I emulate you as my weapon to kill all the inhuman disorders
Author notes
Decry all inhuman tendencies
A contest entry
- Choose your weapon by Neophyte.
600 points, ended April 28, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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not exactly sure what the weapon is, but the message is clear!
nice writeup and thank you for entering -
such a powerfull poem..the imagery was really well done!! you have a lot of skill. Keep writing and I will be looking at more of your poems best of luck in this contest


