In the sea of sanctuary, two men stand.
The Wings of the wind carrying their words to no man.
The sunlight peaks,
Floods memories of the sea of life.
Tension so strong it seems strummed by the wind.
As one man falls to the water as the other throws him in.
A contest entry
- Clicky clicky - c'mon in to my kick ass contest! no.2 by Kahliya.
900 points, ended May 8, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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kool
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'The wings of the wind' what a beautiful phrase
A very well written piece - very eerie the end was kind of strange - I didn't really expect it but it didn't come as a surprise either - excellent!
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lol a murderer! really this was great, the choice of words and length made it powerful. how many times have i been in a situation where the tension was so thick you could cut it with a knife eh? to many haha
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i lov it. keep up the good work. ur stile is realy good.
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thanks deena yours is too
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