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Dad

My hero of all hero’s
The apple of my eye
I know that you are watching
Taking care from way up high
I love you oh so dearly
And at night I kneel and pray
I know that you are close
We’ll meet again some happy day

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This poem is about my dad who was killed when i was 16, he was an inspiration to me in every way and my ul;timate hero.

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  • GoodKnightPoet
    May 2, 2007

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    It's very nice that you think your dad is a hero. This is a good tribute to him. It is such a tradgedy to lose him at 16. I'm glad that you were able to have courage in your life and muc hope.


  • BabyBun silver member
    May 2, 2007
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    A simple but poignant tribute to your ultimate hero. Thanks for entering and good luck!