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Reverse Ryhme

Delighted - is how I feel being
Reunited with my family

Shortsighted - that is what happened
invited by my cousin to her wedding

Excited - is how I felt when she walked down that aisle
United to her new king

Recited - these beautiful words
"sighted you see a love between thy forever will last"

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  • InMemoryofCharlieJr
    May 4, 2007
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    OK. Thank you for the adive/commenyt.


  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    May 4, 2007
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    This is a good attempt...

    A good attempt at the form, however, the meter is a bit rough...The content of the poem was beautiful, just did not meet the standards for this form. If you would like some help with this rhyme scheme and meter/structure, feel free to IM me. Keep penning...


    ~Ray~