Your eyes touch my soul, touch my heart
I see such a pain that it tears me apart
There’s a depth like the deep dark sea
I hear it calling, it’s dragging me
I look deep into your eyes and drown
Your emotions are raw, no need to frown
Every feeling is there for a trace
Your secret soul etched on your face
A contest entry
- Look Into Her Eyes by alta evans.
450 points, ended May 10, 2007, 17 entries
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Im "returning the favor"...and Im glad I did, because excellent poem...I absolutly love the last two lines. I couldnt help but notice your poem seems like the other persons view to my poem! I know its a coincidence but I thought it was cool! Great write...Im going to check out your other stuff :-)
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really good
this poem is really good and i enjoyed reading it,
"every feeling is there for a trace,
your secret soul etched on your face."
i liked this line alot
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