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Just for Tonight

Just for tonight
Our eyes and our bodies
Spoke the words
Our hearts and souls
Longed to say.

Just for tonight
Our hearts and souls
Heard the words
Our eyes and bodies
Spoke loud and clear.

Just for tonight
We were one with each other
As we have been in the past
With others we've loved and lost.

Just for tonight
We loved each other and
The silence of our intimacy
Overpowered the din of our pleasure.

Just for tonight
Turned into morning
And we made love again,
And I surrendered to you.

Just for tonight
Comes again none too soon.
Just for tonight
Let me say I love you.

Just for tonight.

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  • cybercomic
    May 1, 2007
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    nice nice

    hee hee, this was sweet and romantic. I say this every night....... to a different rental...


  • Paulies Cracker
    April 27, 2007

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    oh my gosh this is beautiful!! thank you sooo much for entering!! i'm so glad you did because i LOVED this poem!! good luck!


  • Stickboy gold member
    April 27, 2007

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    hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm this made for some intresting reading mom...hee hee I love you... Lucy u got some splainin to do! Great job you can pen things i only long to be able to put into words! Good luck in contest