Twist not the tongue
It touches the hottest acid drops
Crown the nature and photograph it with all your might
The lovely roses reveal you all the softness of life
Caress the canals and water spots with tenderness in hands
They are speakers eliciting the elixir of life in streams
Beat not the bush rounding it all the while
apathy only remains in all the depths of your purple heart
Welcome not the feelings about death
They stop fully all the sweetness of love in life
Author notes
life resonates in all stakes
A contest entry
- To Live and Breathe and Never Die Again by pointlessdayz.
525 points, ended April 30, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I liked the form you used for this piece. "Welcome not the feelings about death" It had a rather victorian feel to it, somewhat olde englishe (ish)
Thanks for entering my contest!
-alex -
So short and beautifull
really well done you have a really great talent in writing poetry. This piece was so powerfull I wish you the greatest luck in this contest and keep writing
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