There's something about you that
keeps me holding on to what we have
even though my head is saying let go
my heart is fighting for me to keep strong
Every minute with you is unexplainable
because nobody would ever fully understand
what I feel like when you touch me
they can't feel my heart beat faster
when you look in my eyes
they can't feel the way I feel
when I hear you say "I Love You"
and even though I'm scared out of my mind
to fall even more in love with you
I'm so much more scared when I begin
to think that I may lose you
tonight I cried because I'm afraid
to see how far this will actually go
but I really do want to know
if this could ever really work
this is the first time ever in my life
that I have actually been loved by a guy
and that is the scariest thing
because now i have to worry about
whether you are always going to love me or
am I just here till you find something new
I want us to be a while
not end as soon as it begins
because I fell deeply for you
and I can't even begin to explain why
Author notes
I have read the rules and i hope i followed them correctly
A contest entry
- A CONTEST OF EVERYTHING by Darc Soul.
490 points, ended May 11, 2007, 33 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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omg i loooooooooooooooooooove this!!!!!
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Teriffic
I do beliece this is one of your best, It is well written. It is so full of Love,and feelings that could only come from the heart with so much emotions .
With lines like these,
" My Heart is fighting for Me to be strong "
* Because I feel deeply for you
and I can't even begin to explaon why*
This would be a winner in my Book.
Good Luck in the Contest.
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i like it all. u did a great job. I especially liked the part where u said "my heart is fighting for me to keep strong". Well hope your feelings for him will last forever and his with u....God bless.peace!
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