I don't wanna do this,
all this pain,
even if I could,
would I give it away?
I hate the world today...
cant hear what you say,
watch me break,
slip away,
I wanna live in yesterday...
Crumble me up,
In the corner I'll stay
I really don't mind
just throw me away....
I wont fade out
but I'll wither away
if I cant live
in my yesterday...
Dig me a grave,
a cold place to stay,
somewhere I can rot
in my yesterdays
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I wrote this a while ago and didn't plan on ever posting it or anything, but...
Written July 21st, 2003
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clever
some times I wush could go back too. Really good poem! -
Wonderful. I love it. I can equate with it all too well. I remember several great periods in my life that I wish I could relive forever.
Jim Dunlap -
I like it, I think if you added to it, it would make an awesome song.. i can hear it now..
i know what you mean about yesterdays.. they haunt and tear away at each new day so you never live a tomorrow
-fallen n frustrated -
Wow Jaci! This is awesome! I really glad you posted it.
The flow is really great and it just pulled me in real quick.
It was like a rush to me, it's so sad..I know how you feel though..
I would sit in my corner forever..but well..frankly it doesn't talk to me anymore
*cries*
I really love this poem, you have such a great talent!
Love you! Write on girlie!
twizted bizkit -
SICK SHIT
This is really good, I don't know why nobody else commented on it, but I really like it. I totally relate to, but mine was after my Grandma died, all I wanted was to go back and be with her, but I was too little to understand why she wouldn't come back, I just kept asking my mom if we could go to heaven, and vist her....
but yea it's a really good write.
RAYRAY
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