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Life’s Journey

What happened, where did the time go
My memories, they all seem so long ago
Blurry visions of how the world was
Surrealistic reminiscences of what has come to pass

Present flies by, becoming the past
Days race by, all going so fast
Making the first steps into the last chapter
And I’m afraid, time will only go faster

Remembering the forming of my band of brothers
The beginning of an era like no other
Giving each other a chance to survive
United in pain and joy, united for life

Times change, we all aren’t the same
Living in the shadows of our former fame
Following our destiny, pursuing our visions
One makes his escape, the other stuck in addictions

But wherever we are, whatever we need
Wherever life’s journey may lead
Always we remember the times we lived before
And the unity they stood for


United for life

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  • LoveToSeeYouHigh
    April 29, 2007

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    great poem !!! I really loved to read this one

    you are all so connected, I know the unity will never be broken, allthough you all go your own way in life and you probably won't see each other that often...

    It will be a strange feeling when mich will be in south afrika...I know we will all miss him a lot, but I thank God for internet so we will keep in touch...

    maybe next year I will live in Gent, maybe not, but when I don't, you will see me a lot more, to replace the emptiness he leaves behind..

    you too will find the way that will lead you to your destiny !!!

    big kiss
    xXx kleine zusj xXx


    • Phaethon
      April 29, 2007
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      thnx for the comment, although I have to make one correction to what you said.
      'you are all so connected' should be, 'we are all so connected' .

      You are part of it. Always was .

      Xx
      Tim


  • Things Fall Apart
    April 27, 2007

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    This was definitely an amazing write. =] Life changes, Doors close, New doors are found and open, but they are all for the good in one way or another.
    Taylor.


  • NinetyNemo
    April 27, 2007
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    U4L!!

    Kweet egt ni wa zegge gast, bangelijk geschreve!


  • Lunatyx
    April 27, 2007

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    I think this is one of the best poems you've written so far ! It's amazingly well. The poem is heartfelt, honest and it's blaking of confidence ( don't know if you can say that about a poem, but it feels that way )

    You're right, time is flying by faster then it ever did before. This year will be the year of changes and the beginning and end of some chapters... Although things will change, I'm confident that we will always stay united because of our memories and all the things we did together as a group.

    Amazing poet mate.

    Greetz

    PS: It's positive that this poem isn't a depressive one, write more of these

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