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Finality

The sands of time have passed me
by,
All I can do is begin to
cry,
The bells are ringing
I cannot hear,
All my hope has turned to fear,
The crow is calling
The time is now
It's time to take
My final bow

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Written a few years ago, my poetry was all dark

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  • conniev1 silver member
    May 31, 2007
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    Nicely written.

    It is a very dark piece, to me it shows a very down hearted, depressed person, deciding to change it all by dying. It is a powerful, and moving piece. It's a place that I've been at before. It made me want to scream, NO
    DON'T DO IT. I know, it can get better. Very intense poem.


  • CarpathiaBennetar
    April 27, 2007
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    Hehe, emo. Nice. XD