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Lonely Earth

Beautiful figures fly gracefully across the sky,
Partnered and happy, my heart sinks in watching.
My cloud is lonely, dark against the light,
How can this be Heaven when all I shed are tears?

Wallowing, wishing, wanting deeply,
Searching for you from afar.
So long must I try to reach before feeling alive;
It's a lie -- a hideously drawn illusion! 

In life I walked alone, my death is no different.
From the other side I looked into your happiness,
I wished to bathe in your light and, in it, be held.
Tearful wishes never granted.

I cry over the edge and hope a tear lands on your hand,
Look up and remember me, dear love, I did it often.
This is but another earth I walk upon, lonely;
Heaven will not greet me until you come to call.

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