I'm trying to make up for the things I lack;
My actions are in vain.
The tears are to wash me clean, but they cannot.
My broken heart won't stop bleeding.
You're killing me and you don't even know.
I'm crying for your embrace...
I keep smashing into your wall.
You refuse even the smallest ray
Of sunshine to penatrate.
So how can I compare to the sun?
I don't want to give up, but are you giving me a choice?
I'm crying myself to sleep...
I want to know more of this angel,
Who's taken the breath right out of me;
And of this devil who's
Stolen the light from my eyes.
You won't let me in.
I'm dying for your affection...
I thought I was stronger than this.
You are wearing me down.
I cannot break through your barricade.
My own battered soul
cannot withstand your defenses much longer.
I'm dying just to love you...
I've chosen this path, I must persevere.
Please don't shut me out forever
I could never win this on my own.
You must help me disassemble this wall you've built.
Because I'm lost in loving you.
Dedicated to ZCB
Author notes
I have been trying to tell the guy i love how much i love him, but he refuses to acknowledge. he is breaking me down, i do not know if i can hang on much longer....
~Erica~
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Wow
Though I consider this more of a song than a poem, it is very good. Highly emotional, and very easy to connect with x, thankyou for sharing
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very, very good. really made me think about my own similar situation. the way u said "i'm dying to love you" i know how ya feel ! great job, keep on sharing with us =)



