Run away from reality,
Take it to another place,
A place where dreams
Won't let you down.
Your arms shelter me,
I look into your face,
It says everything
Your love, without a sound.
Don't lose my memory,
Remember this place,
The songs we sing,
The love we found,
My love,
Whispers,
Cry,
Goodbye
Author notes
R.I.P V-Tech
A contest entry
- Real Feelings by Jocilynn Destroyed.
600 points, ended May 12, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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That was good...I like it...good luck in my contest. -
Awww, how sadly touching! It is how I see losing my beloved Vic when death claims its due! A touching tribute to a loved one passing! Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors.
Hetohke'e * 
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We were all shocked by the tragedy at Virginia Tech but I think this poem is too superficial for the enormity of the losses suffered. It seems more suited to a failed romance.
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This was not about Virginia Tech. The contest owner said to put "RIP V Tech" in the author notes. Until your comments, I didn't put it together.
This poem was not about VT......it was about failed romance. Thank you for reading, I appreciate it.
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