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Baby Blues

Those baby blues
I fell in love
With out a chance
I lost my life
All because those baby blues

Those baby blues
Had me stuck
And I couldn't see around them
I lost my life
All because those baby blues

Those baby blues
Had me fooled
So, fooled I couldn't hear the lies
I lost my life
All because those baby blues

Those baby blues
Showed no truth
Yet, showed no lies
I lost my life
All because those baby blues

Those baby blues
I have figured them out
I am out of the trance
I lost my life
All because those baby blues

Those baby blues
Are now crying
Because of what I said
I lost my life
All because those baby blues

Those baby blues
Even with tears
Were the most beautiful eyes
I started over
All because those baby blues

These beautiful greens
Have taken over
Those baby blues
You have lost your life
All because these beautiful greens

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  • Kimojuno
    October 6, 2008

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    Wow-this poem speaks such wonders and really shows the issues with relationships that are based off simple physical things instead of what is in your heart and the love you should have for someone instead of loving something specifically about someone.

    Jeff.


  • shattered logic
    May 13, 2007

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    wow well done,
    I love the repetition it mirrors your poem, i like the way this is put together, the flow and word choice is perfect. I also love the story in the words. It got better as the poem progressed. Well done and good luck!!