As the cancer spreads through my system,
cry or don't cry,
just let me say the things I never got to
I wish that I could erase my mistakes
so that I wasn't so disappointing,
I wish that I hadn't pushed you away
because there were times I needed you,
I wish the loved ones knew when I needed them
to take care of me and my sorrow,
But most of all I wish
there was more time
to gain everything I wanted
Listen to my favorite lyrics
and you will understand,
even if just a little
So cry for me or don't,
but let me go
A contest entry
- Last words... by Nitenovanavium.
1000 points, ended May 2, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Amazine.
Take care;
Pretty.
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wow, this was a very deep and emotional peice. great work!!! there was sooo much emotion portreyed in this piece, and i loved every second of it... you have a nice way of putting word together. never loose it, nor give it up!
yours greatfully
mike!
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