what is death
a precursor to a new life.
I will live again
I will be reborn
my hair and my heart will never die
I am still so gracious
thank you for all the hospitality
I didn't die in vain
please tell the king
tell mom I am home
tell dad I'll be with grandpa soon
a precursor to a new life
is the ending of an old one
this is a great adventure.
a chance to start over.
A contest entry
- Last words... by Nitenovanavium.
1000 points, ended May 2, 2007, 20 entries
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Comments
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rebirth is an interesting topic,
its so randomly structured... but it has a structure none the less. although ive never managed to define it. in this poem a particularly liked some of the opinions youve put forward. i dont nessissarily agree with all of them but its nice to see them shine through.
good luck in the competition!
yours
mike!
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