This is one of the saddest times of the year,
It's a time to remember,
When others are happy, laughing, and singing,
I am alone curled up crying,
I wish she was here,
To give me a hug and say it's okay,
It's so lonely,
Mother's Day
Author notes
I lost my mom to cancer 3 years ago. This poem is me trying to explain how it feels to people who haven't lost anyone. <3
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This is quite a short snippet that you've written here, but the feelings and the emotions you have reflected within your words are very clear.
I'm so sorry to hear you've lost your mother to this horrible disease
Thank you for entering, wish you the best of luck.
Leander -
*hugs*
Thank you for sharing this. I am terribly sorry for your loss. I appreciate you sharing this with my and my family as I'm sure some will be able to relate come Mother's day next year.
Blessings,
<3 Dian
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Well written.
I loved this, I can completely relate, though not with my mom, I lost my dad when I was younger, so its hard to deal on fathers day, but it has gotten easier as the years go on...not-to forget, but to survive. Well done, and straight from the heart.
Thanks for entering and best of luck!
<3BeautifulDisaster9 -
So sorry about losing your mom. I lost my dad when I was ten so know how you are feeling. Welcome to AP - have fun on this site. Hope to read more of your poetry. Thanks for commenting on Troubled Teen tonight. This poem you wrote here is written from the heart and we feel the emotion and the sadness in these lines. Good entry.
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awe....that was so sad. you just might win. that was ahhhhhhhhhhhhh so emotional. i am so sorry cheesey...
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aw. hun so very sorry don't know what it's like to loose a parent to cancer...but do know what it's like to loose a parent....great job and good work
keep writting your very talented and good luck in the contest
XTashaX -
Ok this is an Awesome poem.... well wrote and full of emotion, which is awesome in a poem with so few words... most people write and write in a poem to get there point across Good Jo..
~*~ Mystic
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