The time is here
to make things clear
though I don't want to
For you will want just to argue
You want everyones respect
Yet not give it not caring about your affect
Peoples feelings toward you toil
And you cry 'Oh pity me' when they boil
There is no one as righteous
No one as courteous
No one as caring as you
If only you knew
But the damage is done
And nobody has won
For there was nothing to win anyway
Though there was alot to loose that you just toss away
That wich was thrown
So many only dream they could own
You dare to call others stupid
Yet should have known not to doubt cupid
let alone against the devine campaigning
Keep going this way and soon you'll be the one aching.
You'd have a life if you'd let others live theirs
There would be no tensions or ill feeling cares
You aren't anyones ruler
Nor is anyone your commander
So the time come
To dish back what you thinks fun
To show you the feel and affect
Of what it is like to be given no respect
Please tell me what you think
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Welcome to AP
Nicely done; very strong and very emotive...
Aside from a few minor spelling errors (don't worry; that's not my strong point,either), this is a very creative and well done piece
Welcome to all poetry
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Amen
Some people speak before they think and some like to stir things up only to find it always comes back around. Life is to short and if one persons life is not what they would want it to be is no reason to drag others down with them. But misery loves company what was makeing that person so miserable and the answer will come forth.
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