Before departure onto those
sacred, sanctity lands, acknowledgement
towards all leaves no regrets made...
Granted that life has its pros
and cons, this soul will simply
wait and therefore stand alongside
to be those eyes--no, that guide
when you, yourself, feels as if
the world will submerge with
grief
This is merely a new chapter
of life which no regret can
be acclaimed
A contest entry
- Last words... by Nitenovanavium.
1000 points, ended May 2, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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no great offense meant, but although this poem is spectacular in many ways, but the 'last words' aspect of this poem is unclear, could you perhaps clarify it for me, so i may be able to understand, otherwise when judging comes i may have to skip this one due to a misjudgement...
however i did love the poem itself. i just have to abide by my own rules...
the mode and the meaning i could make out in this poem was outstanding! there is alot of emotion in this poem weather it is intended or not!
bravo, and please get back to me...
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this is like the 'last will and testament' of a poetry writer to their family
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no one could have said it better, you put something strong into this poem, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Good
Huzzah! Love this!!!!!
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I like this a lot... you speak very poetic with only moments left... hehe... but this was beautiful! Rock on! xoxo Meg
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