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Gallows

Ominous
Silent
Waiting

Mindless
Callous
Dull

Worthless
Cheap
Feared

Powerful
Swift
Execution

Residing against an ash grey night
Dawn approaches to herald the neck
Rope burn and jeering, frightened
Women bring the children
Their wolf like faces snarl
Teeth bear words unspoken elsewhere
Lips part extremities of hate

Malignant
Trusted
Tyrant

The deed is done and the crowd disperses
Nothing new to the ash grey winter morning
A final spurt of retribution

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  • vierna
    July 18, 2007
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    Brilliantly done! I enjoyed reading this one...quite gruesome...lovely! Cheers