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That Night (prewritten)

That night you came to my house,
The night we sat in your car,
Thats when I knew without a doubt,
I love you so much for who you are.
For the first time,
We told each other everything,
What we want to find,
How I love to hear you sing.
I never felt so comfortable with anyone,
I've never told anyone so much,
But talking to you is just so much fun,
And I love to feel your touch.
And for the first time ever,
You really opened up with me,
Everything became better,
Because now I could really see.
I saw that you and I,
We have something so beautiful,
So now I don't know why,
You have made things so difficult.
That night I knew,
That we were meant to be,
All just because you,
Held me like you really, truly loved me.
I thought nothing could bring us apart,
Things would always be same,
But now we seem so far,
Leaving me feeling such pain.
Now we are not together,
And it just does not feel right,
Things will never get better,
And I can't sleep at night.
I still need you,
And I hope you need me,
Because what am I suppose to do,
When being without you makes me so unhappy.
I want more than anything,
To go back to that night,
I would tell you everything,
And never let you out of my sight.
I will never forget it,
And I hope you never do,
How could I forget,
The night I realized I loved you

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Written July 21st, 2003

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  • SilverxXxShadow
    July 24, 2003
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    This was an interesting piece you've got here. Love is such a weird thing...yup. You had nice rhyming going on. Thank you for entering my contest...good luck.

    ~Shadow