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Waiting for the Rain to Stop

I am sitting here, so bored, without you
Just waiting, for the rain to stop
So that I can go back outside and feel free
I wonder what you are doing,
And if you are having any more fun than me,
I can only hope,
because I would not want you to feel so contained,
Like I do now
I wish that we could seal the deal
We know what we feel for each other,
But when will we ever get to any real time together,
Just us, and no one else
No friends of mine to ask us how we are doing 
And none of yours, to listen to our conversation
What will we talk about tomarrow?
I know what we'll talk about,
Anything
That's what we always talk about
Anything, everything
The relief that flows through my body, when I see your face


I will be eating dinner soon
I wonder if we will be doing it together sometime
Will you have enough to eat?
I hope that you're happy right now,
Maybe you're reading, or watching telivision,
Or maybe just looking out of the window, watching the rain,
Just like I like to do,
Just to think, it is the most relaxing thing that I know


I saw you just a couple of hours ago,
But I cannot wait until we can talk again
I hope that it's tomarrow, when we usually talk
I wish that we could spend more time together
So that I could get to know you even better
But enough talk about tomarrow, and the later days
Because for now, I am just waiting for the rain to stop.

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  • whatever girl
    May 3, 2007

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    ah a very sweet poem!!!
    and yes i too am waiting for the rain to stop
    lovin the poems!!!


  • C.c
    April 27, 2007
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    WOW!!!!!!!!

    this is a really good poem. i like it.


    • TWiSTEDxCUPCAKE
      April 27, 2007
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      Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that you like it. I really did write this when it was raining outside, and I was really bored, and all that I could do was think about him. And I love being outside with my friends, but I hate it when I can't go outside because of the weather.