you can hurt me,
because you have before
but I still go back to you
you don't know how amazing you can be
your laugh makes me cry
your smile makes me melt
your eyes are a mystery I can't find
you tricked me,
while I trusted you
because you had all the answers,
all the charm,
and all the grace
I'm fighting a losing battle
while I run this race
you're winning
because I put my heart in your hands
how stupid I was
to give myself away
to the one person I will never have
A contest entry
- heartbreak hotel ♥ by Captain Obvious.
375 points, ended April 30, 2007, 52 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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awesome!
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Great job!
The poem deserves applause.
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The emotions apparent in this poem are really outstanding. I can feel your pain from reading this poem. You have some good figurative speech. You have some inner rhymes, as well. This is really good. The sense of loss at the end is a perfect ending. Great job
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