Daddy, I'm sorry I couldn't be around for you.
and Mommy I'm sorry I want you to know I love you too.
Elise, My big sister I wish I could tell you how much you mean to me.
I never wanted things to end like this but I can't take it anymore.
Travis, grow up and be strong and don't let anyone well you what to do.
My best friends, I couldn't have made it through life without you,
I took a shot to the head, and I hit the floor.
It's noone's fault you couldn't change this.
Alex, I know that by you I sure as hell won't be missed.
you put me through so much yet I stood by you,
and you shunned my love and left me alone.
so confused, not knowing what to do.
I love to see how all my friendships have grown.
But my time has come and I'm sorry I couldn't stay.
........I love you........
A contest entry
- Last words... by Nitenovanavium.
1000 points, ended May 2, 2007, 20 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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wow, you sure managed to capture one of the deepest aspects of this entire contest... pure sorrow. however the other two i havn't seen yet...
this was absolutley heartwrenching, i liked the fact you added anger as well, nice touch.
marvelous last words ^_^
yours faithfully
mike
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