Never could I hate them, little, bastard curs
I understand, by nature, every one are 'hers'
And, oh, they are adorable. Mine! Yes, every one
Nature doesn't care at all how I live through the fun
Feel them, climbing, clawing, their single goal, my teats
And Nature, twisted, psycho bitch, sees them born with TEETH!
Author notes
Pepper is a tough old girl, she'll be fine. And those puppies are a handfull even to LOOK at!
A contest entry
- LOVE HURTS!!! by Recluse Writer.
475 points, ended May 5, 2007, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is a great poem...It is cute and funny and i love the way you describe the little critters!!! Great write...
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cute
I can see why this took the gold - funny, insightful and 'ouch' for poor mommy!...lol
Enjoyed this and laughed, and shuddered from the teeth, at the same time.
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Thanks so much, I enjoyed writing it. I always thought taht it was odd for animals to be born with teeth present. Nature is funny!!! Thanks for the kind words and all, sincerely.
Live LARGE!
Rick
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Your style seems very familiar so if I know you please do not hunt me down for asking for spell check re ckimbimg.
Linda
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Thanks for the reminder, and the read, and contest. Yes, we've crossed paths a time or two. Glad you liked the post.
Live LARGE!
Rick
Me II
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Thanks for the great peek into Peppers mind.
I dare say mother nature has her reasons but "ouch"
for the mum regardless.
I wish you well in my contest.
Linda & Pepper 
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Wow! Gold! Thank you dearly, and tell Pepper I hope for the best for her. Love the pic.
Live Large
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A well deserved gold it was...you're welcome.
I liked where you took the opening lines and believe
the final two could well have come from her mouth could she talk. Overall great poetry in my view.
I shall pass on the message
Linda
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