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coma


.x.

footsteps thunder down the street
[sleep baby sleep]
the noise drowns out your pulse drumbeat
[induce this coma, fathoms deep]

.x.

dig up trenches, drenched in blood
[as chlorophom engulfs your lung]
to simulate this forelone flood
[close your eyes love day is done]

.x.

this death machine made melody
[a horror movie, side show freak]
this wartorn skin a fantisy
[this slashed smashed body bashed and weak]

.x.

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i don't know if i'm done with this yet.

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  • Wicked Angel
    April 26, 2007
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    youre amazing


    • ruiven
      May 9, 2007
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      i was amazing, this is my first sign of poetical life in months. but thank you. i'll try to write more, even if it's just for you. lol. gimme a call sometime, we'll chill.
      -raven