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Dragon's Love

Greenish-blue with a hint of silver
This tiny dragon has a passion
Of protecting his true love
A young maiden in search of love
Protection, from the evil men in the world

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I don't know if this works, but I hope you like it anyway

A contest entry

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  • Fallen-Knight
    October 1, 2007
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    me like

    dragons rule this is easy to read and i ike it. You got a good shot mate!


  • AutumnsFlame
    May 6, 2007

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    Um... This didn't really say much to me... hm... you entered a specific contest, and in general, I don't think this really works very well. There's no imegery, and not much meaning... Good luck in my contest and thank you for entering.


  • Methusala
    May 6, 2007

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    Hmmmm. Interesting write. For some reason. I actually liked this. Good job.

    ~Dead Kennedy Rolls


  • JohnnyD gold member
    April 27, 2007

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    Ahhhhh, this was really cute and well done gal! bravo!!! nice work!!

    JD


  • FabApocalypse
    April 27, 2007

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    Yay! Well done you for your gold. It is a fine poem! Time for a lap of honour methinks!


  • patsoldcat
    April 27, 2007
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    absolutly top shelf

    i loved the love and romance in this thank you


  • patsoldcat
    April 27, 2007
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    thank you

    got your poem
    be blessed in peace and happiness.


  • J-Lee18m
    April 26, 2007
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    I like it, but what makes men evil?

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