Greenish-blue with a hint of silver
This tiny dragon has a passion
Of protecting his true love
A young maiden in search of love
Protection, from the evil men in the world
Author notes
I don't know if this works, but I hope you like it anyway
A contest entry
- of dragons and love by patsoldcat.
525 points, ended April 27, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The I'm-sick-of-reading-crap contest. by AutumnsFlame.
507 points, ended May 12, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Win another Gold for a Gold! by LadyInRed55.
300 points, ended June 12, 2007, 51 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dragons! by Fallen-Knight.
450 points, ended October 7, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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me like
dragons rule this is easy to read and i ike it. You got a good shot mate!

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Um... This didn't really say much to me... hm... you entered a specific contest, and in general, I don't think this really works very well. There's no imegery, and not much meaning... Good luck in my contest and thank you for entering.
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Hmmmm. Interesting write. For some reason. I actually liked this. Good job.
~Dead Kennedy Rolls
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Ahhhhh, this was really cute and well done gal! bravo!!! nice work!!

JD

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Yay! Well done you for your gold. It is a fine poem! Time for a lap of honour methinks!
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absolutly top shelf
i loved the love and romance in this thank you

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thank you
got your poem
be blessed in peace and happiness. -
I like it, but what makes men evil?

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