I guess I didn't respect this life as much as I should have.
My family and friends
The innocent by-standers
The crime and passion.
I loved with every fiber of my being
As for it being returned, It was more than anyone could hope for.
Please don't cry. Please don't.
Just laugh. We had a good time, even in the midst of the pain.
Life always seemed.. to get better...
I love you..
A contest entry
- Last words... by Nitenovanavium.
1000 points, ended May 2, 2007, 20 entries
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Comments
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Very nicely wrote!
I love it!!
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... the words i love you truly are the strongest words in the english language, and you've brought out there strength even though that nowadays they seem so overused... bravo to you for bringing back life in these so simple and yet so powerful words...
good luck in my contest
yours sincerely and greatfully
mike
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