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Farewell

You are leaving me soon
I feel my world crash to its doom
I realized that I couls still have you
But it is also a matter of time that I may lose you

Basically I do not deserve you
But I did everything to be worthy for you
You my not like the real me or my past
though my feeling for you will still last

It's just a matter of time till you leave
I was just wondering if I could make your feeling weave
If and onl if you feel the same way as I do
I want you to know that the best thing in my life is you

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  • penciledlives
    April 27, 2007

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    Reminds me of She by Elvis Costello(di ba? I think...). Yung theme song ng Nottinghill.

    Sweet nung second verse...my favorite part. ^^ and the last line.