She hates roses. She always has.
A Tribute to a screwup.
Faithfulness Unreturned.
She's always so angry.
Roses are beautiful.
They signify love.
Does that mean?
She hates love?
How can this be reckoned with.
To teach her to love their beauty.
To help her see that its not
Out of Being Unfaithful that they come.
Its an expression of love.
A Flower that equals no other.
Its beauty consumed in the petals.
The freshness of it opening.
The heady fragrance of a new rose
Turned upside down and pressed
Open the book and there it lies
A Fond memory of the one who gave it.
Or an angry removal from the book.
Tossed to the ground or crushed
In a hand the petals turn to dust.
Is this how one should view love?
Tell me if there's a way to fix it?
A way to change how hurt she feels
The minute she sees a rose in any hand.
Outstretched to place it next to her heart
Please tell me what you think
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wow..are you sure you don't know me...weird..
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Nice
I like it... makes me think about how odd our traditions are... we give a rose, something that will wilt and die rather quickly to signify our love...
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BEautifully written.
Awsome work, I like your work very much.
K xx
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oh yeah i contected with it cause i dont personally like roses myself either, and i am angry alot too which isnt good all the time. i like it
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wow, you've described the importance of the rose in a lovely attire. love this very much and it is excellent!
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I learned a long time ago that perception is reality...and our perceptions of reality can not be pushed upon others...when we allow our own perceptions to deepen along the lines of others, we do our inner strengths a huge favor... life is a process of experiences...you are certainly experiencing life on a lot of levels...good for you for writing about it...peace and light, Kendal
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AMAZING !
im speechless ilike this alot i just dont know what to say about it ... it takes me back into tmy own past and the "roses" of my life.. i was sohappy when i got them...even though they represented the biggest mistake i have evermade ...i hated them... buti loved them ... i still keep them even though they are dead now... i love them and hate them...this poem really really makes me think ... lol ... you have done an amazing job here !
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very nice flow to this. i like it a lot. probably because i have an obsession with roses lol.
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