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memories

MEMORIES

Childhood was so beautiful,
So elegant, so lovely.
The days were like beads on the year’s necklace,
Passing before I even realized.

Within years I climbed the first steps to school,
Scared of what was awaiting me.
Slowly I enjoyed my second home school,
Wishing I never would have to part with it.

Now I understand the meaning of life,
Now is the time to look forward in life.
To aspire the dreams of childhood,
To raise the wings, to fly high. 

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  • grannyeri gold member
    July 10, 2007

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    Belated welcome to AP. Congratulations too on posting that first poem - remember how excited I was and how good it felt to let others know I was a poet. Childhood memories are precious and connect us to our past, our roots, those that shared that time in our lives. This is eas to read and understsand. Liked the flow and the message you share with others. Keep writing,. Hope to see more of your poetry on this site soon.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    April 27, 2007
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    WELCOME TO ALLPOETRY !

    Beautifully penned, with such thoughts of truth. The imagery in this is very honest. Keep flying dear poet!

    If you need any help here at AP please don't heaitate to contact myself or any other online Greeter. We are always willing to help
    Gaylene