Try to hold onto everything
Watch everyone leave
Feel yourself fall
And bleed on the floor
Get up and stumble
Stumble and crawl
Now you're not strong enough
To take anymore
'Falling angel
Get on your knees
I don't want to hear your cries
Just come and beg me please.'
A faded red band,
A broken wall of friends,
A broken heart,
And silence hanging in the air...
AM I STRONG ENOUGH?
My God, how much more do I have to fight?
I'm trying to keep my fire burning
But the darkness blinds my light...
'Falling angel
Get on your knees
I don't want to hear your cries
Just come and beg me please.'
DON'T GIVE IN!!!
(Even though you're breaking)
DON'T GIVE UP!!!
(Even though your soul is aching)
DON'T LET THIS BEAT YOU!!!
(Even though your faith is shaking)
YOU - HAVE - TO - STAND - YOUR - GROUND
God I can't get up -
My heart is just too heavy;
My Lord, I cannot stand against
This cruel enemy...
'Falling angel
Get on your knees
I don't want to hear your cries
Just come and beg me please.'
NO! I CAN'T GIVE IN!!
I will get up and fight
NO! I WON'T GIVE UP!!
Because I have God's light
I can fight and lose
And sink into the depths of despair
But I know I'll rise again
Because God's light will find me there
You can tread me down as much as you please
But you will never see me on my knees,
You can hurt me and abuse me,
You can beat me and make me cry,
You can love me and leave me
And never tell me why,
You can break this body,
You can take and break this heart,
But the wings of my soul will never die
Because My Lord will
GIVE ME STRENGTH TO
F
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'Now you rising demons
Get back on your knees!
I won't hear your hateful lies -
I'll have you begging please!'
Please tell me what you think
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this is good. I liked it. =)
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awfully long, but the first stanza caught my eyes and i had to read more. it was beautiful and really describes the strength and weaknesses of how hard life can be.
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Fantastic!!
Holy cow! Haha.. You just blew me away!!! Amazing write! I can't even express how that affected me except to say it blew me away! Wonderful job, dear!! I Love it!!
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Thank you Butterfly
I'll most definitely check out more of your work! xx
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You're most welcome!
I'm checki' you out more as we speak... 
~Brenna
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AWESOME
this is really good it can relate to so many people i so many differnt ways. it is a exclent write. you are right you have to keep fighting and yea sometime you feel like your at your end but you just have to keep going. i was at that point awhile ago and it is hard sometimes but i get throug it. and now im trying to help other peope. but yeah like i said this wonderful and true on so many levels and to so many people. this poem has touched me and it just is geart. i you ever wanna talk sometime just message me.
Janet
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