patiently waiting
just sitting around
hoping my heart
will catch something profound
really want you so much
to snap at the bait
not wanting to stay
much longer to wait
not like fishing for fish
when so many arrive
I only want you
so that I can thrive
for your birthday
I'll give you this love
just need you to hang on
we'll fit like a glove
I'll reel you up slowly
won't lose you at all
no reasons to fear
I won't let you fall
please look for my treat
it's meant just for you
we'll live life together
a love that's so true
A contest entry
- One Day Image Prompt(s) by HerbalGoat.
300 points, ended April 27, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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love is a precious gift to give to anyone. i'm happy for whoever this poem is for
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almost sounds like good use to but the butterflies in the stomach to.
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Congratulations on winning a well deserved silver. This piece was very well written. Well done! James.
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What a precious poem.
I absoultly loved the way this was worded my friend.
I wish you all the beat in the contest.
I just loved this. All the way to the little heart on the hook.
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