I sit here on this lonely shore,
wondering what life has in store,
angling for the catch of the day,
a heart to chase my blues away.
I perch here thinking of what might be,
as I dangle my heart into life's sea.
Will my mate see my attraction?
Love to give with satisfaction.
Upon the rocks I wait and sigh,
the lure becomes heavier and I cry.
This heart is true, not a decoy,
a nibble here will give true joy.
I won't give up, that's not my style,
even though I've waited a while
As cold waves wash around my heart,
I'll wait here for a brand new start.
A contest entry
- One Day Image Prompt(s) by HerbalGoat.
300 points, ended April 27, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow....again...LOL Awesome write. The flow was just great and your rhyme scheme perfect. Your Imagery untouchable. BRAVO for ANOTHEr great Piece and best of luck in the contest.
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awww. its soooooo kute.. i love those pictures. the poem was really wll written and the rhyming is great.
well done grandmama!!!
Claire-Anne
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verygood
This is very good and it goes well with the picture and its so sweet .well done -
Very, very good.
I really like the rhythm and the rhyming you've used.
Very good use of imagery.
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