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Alone

You left me to fend for myself alone
Now look at me, i'm all grown
There are things you should have shown
You left me to fend for myself alone

You left me to fend for myself alone
I used to wish on a wishing bone
That someday i wouldn't be own my own
You left me to fend for myself alone

You left me to fend for myself alone
Now your emotions are like a cyclone
Leaving me here on my own
You left me to fend for myself alone

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  • XfaceXdownX
    May 8, 2007
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    this is really good. i like it a lot. i can relate to it.

  • got ur message and i def will make sure i do

  • fantastic

    i love the poem and i know how u feel i was in the same position plenty of times but things will get better i promise!!!!