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I guess its wrong...

I didnt mean to cause u pain,
see thats my problem,
its my middle name.
bitch by heart,
pretty by chance.
I cant be something Im not,
sorry I didnt tell u from the start.

Im the kinda girl,
that learned not to care.
Im the kinda girl,
that didnt see you anywhere.

I dont have faith in others,
and I always see them for their worst.
I learned it when I was little,
so I couldnt be hurt.

I dont believe in dreams,
because I think they're a waste.
I dont believe in destiny,
because mine didnt come in time.

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just scribbling down thoughts. not tryen to ,make a poem or anything, just letting feelings out.

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  • sometimes just letting it all out makes for the best writes we could hope for....I have something called ...But you can't see through the smile...it was really just a freewrite to get out what I had in my head about how I say one thing when I want to scream out another.....anyhow Chin up.


  • Shadow-Syndrome
    May 4, 2007
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    i love this one too! its so good. your an amazing poet.


  • badddgirl
    April 26, 2007

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    Awesome poem

    I really honestly can relate to this.

    I dont have faith in others,
    and I always see them for their worst.
    I learned it when I was little,
    so I couldnt be hurt.

    I dont believe in dreams,
    because I think they're a waste.
    I dont believe in destiny,
    because mine didnt come in time.

    Wow, I like this a lot.

    Great job!


  • Midnite wolf gold member
    April 26, 2007
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    cool

    i like this, it sounds so much like me, its a great write, well done, tc x x