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My Princess



Great is our blessing coming from God
Enfolding in our hands a beauty to behold
No other creature as wonderful as she
In her uniqueness as ever could be
Enchanting as ever whenever she smiles
Vulnerable when it comes to the people she loves
Ever expressing God's love through her kindness

Always exuding such charms inexplicable
Never a dull moment whenever she's around
Dainty as ever in her sweet simplicty
Reflecting the joy she found in the Lord
Endures unbelievably her growing up pains
Assured of God's guidance in her safari of life

Now that she has become truly a lady
Aware that life has its twists and turns
Believing that God does the orchestration
Leaving to Him whatever befalls
Ever enjoying and truly relishing the gift of life!









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A tribute to my daughter... a blessing from above!

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  • opaqueangel
    September 3, 2007

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    Very very beautifully writen!!! This is very exceptional and I loved absolutly evry word of it....The flow was excelent and you did such a great job portraying your thoughts and feelings about your daughter here. This was my favorite part:
    "Enfolding in our hands a beauty to behold
    No other creature as wonderful as she
    In her uniqueness as ever could be
    Enchanting as ever whenever she smiles
    Vulnerable when it comes to the people she loves"
    Wow such heart felt words. Again excelent!

    • heartpour
      October 22, 2007
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      Just read your comments today. Thank you for taking time to visit my site. I wish you more success in your writings!


  • crystallynnbradford
    August 29, 2007

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    awe...that is so sweet. I have a nephew that's being born this winter...I wish I could write something like this to him...wonderful job

    • heartpour
      August 30, 2007
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      Thank you, Crystal, for dropping by! More success on your compositions!