An apparition's gaze drifts over the perdition that once was his home
A putrid excuse for a home
He had resided there for the last decade
His furtive soul trapped
Lacerated by those who secretly despised it
But still he remained
Praying for a love that would sublimate
A tangible love
It was not to be
After years of unsuccessful elicitation
He had decided to relinquish all ties from his past
A metamorphisis underwent
Callous eyes became vertant eyes
That now say a final farewell to what they knew
This is his apostasy
The tribulation has ended
Author notes
An assignment for a class...vocab class...which will explain the use of vocab...big vocab...
Please tell me what you think
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hehe, through this whole poem, I was thinking, is this for one fo your classes? Because I didn't get a lot of the words... hehe... Anyway, I still liked it. Even tho I don't even know how to say the tile...
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I have to say...for having to use certain vocab, this doesn't even sound forced. I really would expect it to have zero flow, but this had a good feel and rhythm to it. Cool beans. Your teacher will approve, I think. Or I will be forced to dropkick he/she in the face.
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oh, and mom says it sounds like something a braniac wrote. i told her that you have your braniac moments. =]
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haha. yeah, i was wondering about the crazy vocab. Nice poem. Awesome words. =]
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